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Monday, November 5, 2018

Te Kauru Camp 2018- Second draft

The Fear-fall!!
The ride started moving up right to the tippy top. I was mesmerized by the dazzling view, taking a glance  at the radiant sky tower. SWISH!!!!! All of a sudden we shot down like a flying bullet at full speed. My legs were feeling  amputated and flopping like no tomorrow and my stomach seemed hollow.At the end I was shocked  like a stunned fish and my head felt woozy. I felt as though everyone was ready for a less extreme ride, the log flume was our next stop.
When I least expected to fall down while I was talking I got such a giant shock because we shot down. I was extremely stunned at the end.

6 comments:

  1. nice stevie wow that is really going to hook people in well done

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    1. Thank you Rachel! I will definitely come to see your writing soon and comment on it. Looking forward to see it!:)

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    1. Thanks Chilli, the photos are just meant to give people a view of what it looks like. :DDDDD

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  3. Wow! stevie,
    great piece of writing I felt like I was there with you.

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  4. Hi Stevie it's me Yug from last year Tekauru.I see you had a lot of fun at the camp last year especially the fear fall and it sounded exciting to.
    See you on my blog or Tekauru 2019 blogs,this year peoples blogs.bit.ly/tekuru 2019 and that's the blogs link.
    See you later Stevie.
    By Yug.

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